Monday, March 30, 2009

A 55 Fiction

I found this interesting and wanted to try my hand at it...

I search for my toothbrush but can’t find it ...
“N…,” I shout, “Where is amma’s brush?”
N appears and says, innocently, “I put it here,” indicating the bidet. I peep down the pipe – and see three more.
I look at her threateningly.
She smiles angelically, “I was washing them.”
I succumb to her charm…


About 55 Fiction
A literary work will be considered 55 Fiction if it has:
Fifty-five words or less (A non-negotiable rule)
A setting,
One or more characters,
Some conflict, and
A resolution. (Not limited to moral of the story)

6 comments:

J P Joshi said...

"She smiles angelically, “I was washing them.”"

Some smiles can disarm completely. Well said and a nice read. Can visualise this scene.

mesoliloquy said...

Awww...cutie N. She was just trying to help.

sindhu said...

Thank you Joshi for visiting and Solilo...you know how naughty girls can get!I loved your 55F too...

Usha Pisharody said...

Lol! The angelic smile says it all doesn't it?

A lovely story :)

Swaram said...

Well written!

Anuji Abraham said...

I love this fiction! :)